Few weeks before one of my clasemate and me did an oral presentation about a topic connected with beauty. We talked about beauty contest, the benefits, how the contestants prepare them for it and finally we explained to our classmates our opinon about it. As a task of this presentation we have to evaluate our-selves whatching the video but in my case I couldn't see it because my partner lost it, so for this reason in this post I'll explain you what are the defects an how I felt during the presentation.
Our explanation was supported by a powerpoint with some infromation of our topic, but I really believe that there were a lot of information and we could manage without it. Furthermore the presentation was so long because lasted 25 minutes, so we spend a lot of time explaining things unnecesary and we could focused more in the topic.
My body language was non-existent because I was nervous and I believe that I satyed still in the same place during all the presentation. The structure of the presentation I think that was correct because we introduce it, and then explain the ideas in order of importance, at the end we opened a discussion of our topic, but what was lacked, as I said before, was the choice of information because there were many.
The content was right because most of us know what are beauty contest but didn't know what kind of it there are, or in what consist it. So, we introduce new information and as a support for made the presentation more pleasant we use a song which talked about beauty contest. The song was Pretty Hurts by Beyoncé.
As for my language I think that the grammar was easy and wasn't complex, I didn't prepare it much and almost all came naturally we hadn't planned much. For this reason I'm concious that there weren't rich and varied vocabulary or complex grammar. But I believe that everybody understand the presentation because the pronuntation was comprhensible although I stuk talking sometime.
This is my evaluation of my presentation, there were some mistakes that I will keep in mind for the next oral presentation. I'm sorry for don't show you the video but I don't whatc it too, and I hope that you understand that this evaluation is subjective.
